today for writing we had to listen to a story based on world war one and it was called the red poppy after listening to it we had to write a diary the night after the incident. I hope you enjoy it!
Wow Lotte this is powerful writing and I enjoyed reading it. It's great to see you including extra information and adding in how Jim may have felt with detail. A next step for you blog posts would be to see if you can make the writing bigger so that it is easier to read. Keep up the great learning.
Amazing Lotte, Just the fact that at your age you are able to write such a moving piece of writing is amazing. I think it is even more moving because of all the details and impressions you included in it. Awesome keep it up. Sharron
Wow Lotte this is powerful writing and I enjoyed reading it. It's great to see you including extra information and adding in how Jim may have felt with detail. A next step for you blog posts would be to see if you can make the writing bigger so that it is easier to read. Keep up the great learning.
ReplyDeleteAmazing Lotte, Just the fact that at your age you are able to write such a moving piece of writing is amazing. I think it is even more moving because of all the details and impressions you included in it. Awesome keep it up. Sharron
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